So I haven't been on here in absolutely ages. Hello again all

I've been writing a song and hit sort of a mental block, so I thought I'd get some crit and opinions on where to go with it etc. It's in GP5 ver 5.2 format so I'm not sure if everyone's got it

Also I know the name is taken by a few bands, but I'm not creative with names
Quote by Jaffaps2
It's meant to reflect Clapton's career, starts off good but then turns into a piece of shit.

The Lord has done mighty things with his right hand
Psalms chapter 118, verse 12