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Hey S&L,
These are the first lyrics ive written, so this is my first post in S&L.
Its not long, but it gave me a good foundation in writing lyrics.
Lemme know how they are.
Critiques are welcome.

I walked down dirt roads with knapsack on my back
Kickin’ dirtballs that rolled beneath my feet so black
Guitar balanced on back while walkin dusty train tracks
Swearin’ I was never gonna look back.

This towns’ too small and too many people know
How I made a mistake so many years ago
Just give me a break and let me be…
Cause now it’s just Bob Marley, music and me.

I get to the place called Woodstock, far out, music land
Tons of other people listenin’ to the tunes of the Grateful Dead Band
I light up a doobie and pass it round to a few…
While others make love to the sound of The Who.


This towns’ too small and too many people know
How I made a mistake so many years ago
Just give me a break and let me be…
Cause now it’s just Bob Marley, music and me.
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