#1
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this is about one night stands and such like. Cheers.

LOVE IS ILLUSION

Something pulled me in,
The adventure played out in my mind,
The first time with a line,
Like I couldn't be nowhere else,
I felt I can sing the blues,
What have I got to lose?

Love is illusion,
Give me a reason,
To ask for more than tonight,
Love is illusion this time.

Somehow pull me out,
There's a heart holding on to my hand,
But I can't be here on demand,
Square one speaks more to me,
Not to be always counting from ten,
I started this to please mysen.

Love is illusion,
Give me a reason,
To ask for more than tonight,
Love is illusion this time.

It sounds there's nothing left to say,
but God knows we live in the day.

Something pulled me in,
I'm not watching for big screen romance,
I'm watching for maybe a dance,
I see in reality:
I may have lost touch with my mind,
But this world that I made is mine.

Love is illusion,
Give me a reason,
To ask for more than tonight,
Love is illusion this time.
#2
I liked this but I do have a few issues with tense problems and typos:

Something pulled me in,
The adventure played out in my mind,
The first time with a line,
Like I couldn't be nowhere else,
I felt I can sing the blues,
What have I got to lose?

I liked this verse. However, you have a double negative in the fourth line. Also, the fifth line is off; I think it should be either "I feel I can sing the blues" or "I felt I could sing the blues" just to keep things consistent. Other than that, I thought it was good.

Love is illusion,
Give me a reason,
To ask for more than tonight,
Love is illusion this time.

This is a good chorus. I can really imagine this sounding really good. However, do you think "Love is an illusion" would sound better than "Love is illusion". For me anyway, the way you have it sounds a little awkward

Somehow pull me out,
There's a heart holding on to my hand,
But I can't be here on demand,
Square one speaks more to me,
Not to be always counting from ten,
I started this to please mysen.

This was another great verse. The third line really struck a chord with me. However, did you mean to say "myself" in the last line? I think you have a typo there

Love is illusion,
Give me a reason,
To ask for more than tonight,
Love is illusion this time.

It sounds there's nothing left to say,
but God knows we live in the day.

This sounded awkward to me. Maybe "it sounds like there's nothing left to say" would be better. But I think you should consider revising this part

Something pulled me in,
I'm not watching for big screen romance,
I'm watching for maybe a dance,
I see in reality:
I may have lost touch with my mind,
But this world that I made is mine.

Solid verse. Nothing really blantantly off here.

Love is illusion,
Give me a reason,
To ask for more than tonight,
Love is illusion this time


All in all, I really liked it. I thought that everything was consistent with the theme of it. Good job!
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