#4
Thats some pretty good improv there. The wah is nice an funky. There were some good licks in there as well. Your tone was good, but personally I would use a little more high end, but that is subjective of course. Playing was gerenally very neat throughout. The bet advice I coukd give you is to leave space between playing, it adds more of a vocal like cadnece. It also helps build tension.

All around good playing man...C4c?

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#8
Quote by whitenihilist
Thats some pretty good improv there. The wah is nice an funky. There were some good licks in there as well. Your tone was good, but personally I would use a little more high end, but that is subjective of course. Playing was gerenally very neat throughout. The bet advice I coukd give you is to leave space between playing, it adds more of a vocal like cadnece. It also helps build tension.

All around good playing man...C4c?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=20585615#post20585615


Yeah i just realized i dont leave any space for silence!

I will do a video and try to do so! Thanks man
#10
I really liked it a lot. the chops and chucks sounded real nice and it was totally funky. haha. did you record the whole thing or just the improv over a backing track? if you recorded the whole thing, that's extra awesome but still if it was just an improv, it was still excellent. small suggestion though, try to play around with your tone to get more punch to it. it sounded sort of thin but as far as the playing, there isn't much else to say other than it was great.

i wrote a short song if you want to listen/crit. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1157112