#1
I absolutely hate gore metal, but I took a shot at making some lyrics as the first verse flooded into my head while I was on a bike ride this morning

It's fairly tongue in cheek, criticism and comments are appreciated


My maggot infested appendage
tears apart the vestal virgins womb
to pry the wretched stillborn child
from its putrid fleshy tomb

A seed of satan shall be shown no mercy
when in the hands of my lustration
gloveless, guiltless, and encumbered by wrath
to begin this deathly penetration

this is the last time

the withering wench falls from her table
now look her in the eyes
where innocence became a deception
now tears shall reign/rain from mine

this is the last time



/end
I'm a nice guy really
lolburger
Last edited by Hadi The Ghost at Jul 5, 2009,
#2
Ok just ignore my comment but i couldn't help clicking on the link and laughing when i saw the name, sorry...
#3
haha yea dude i hate that metal bull **** too whatever though not everyone knows good music COUGH COUGH ZAKK WYLDE COUGH COUGH
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#4
Quote by brownsfan456
haha yea dude i hate that metal bull **** too whatever though not everyone knows good music COUGH COUGH ZAKK WYLDE COUGH COUGH


The hell you on about, boy?
lolburger
#7
Haha, I read this more as a poemed parody of the content typical in a gore metal song
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