#2
It's cool riffs, but . . . hold on

First off, let's extend the songs. If they're just previews and/or intros, put that in the title as you did with External. Also, get some drums/bass/lyrics going on too. You have 3 guitarists. I'm sure one of you can switch on over to the bass and play some simple bass lines.

Ok, I'm liking some of these riffs, but you don't know how to put them into a song. You play it a few times and end it. Maybe have one person playing it over and over for like 8 bars, and have someone come in with power chords underneath it. There you go, an intro. Than from there you can continue with that chord progression or mix it up.