What the fuck
Am I doing here?

There's so many fish
I need to eat
Before I can die happy.

I've grown six sets of teeth;
My gills thirst for salt water.

I'm no longer the writer I once was;
I'm better.

So this is my fuck off to you;

I'm bitter.
I've wasted so much time trying to find myself
In a coy pond.

I cleaned my room all day,
Put all the old shit in boxes.

Everything moves by the wayside;
I've sold my poetry to buy a small boat
And now I'm off to sea.

Bon voyage to me,
Bon voyage to me.
all i can do is
If a mortal stands before us
Strike him down with sleight of hand.
And if heaven rides against us
Then God himself must be damned.

Computer Science major! Apple enthusiast!
I wear Vibrams and type with Dvorak!

can you put your pieces in bottles and throw them into water that's 100% definately going to make it to Manchester even though Manchester isn't by the sea? Or just email or something. Your poetry makes me tick.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
Last edited by DigUpHerBones at Jul 7, 2009,
If you are definitely going, you should telephatically send me your work. If you do, I won't point out that you spelt Koi wrong
You can't leave without putting up the Quicky Comp finals... COME ON MAN!

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Find a dice and assign a number to each girl. Throw the dice.

The number you hope for at the moment you throw the dice, is the one you'll want to keep.
Are you a frikin Shark?
You can call me Aaron.

Out on parole, any more instances of plum text and I get put back in...
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Bottom one in the list buddy.
*reported* =P

For somewhat realz though,
You can't leave, you're new here and you don't know the rules. How can you leave when you just got here?
Promises meant a lot back then.
Possibly one of the greatest things I've ever read here....
“I smoke. If this bothers anyone, I suggest you look around at the world in which we live and shut your f*ckin' mouth.” RIP