UG's Twitchy Fella
Join date: Jan 2007
1,811 IQ
Well I was going to, but since you're too impatient to wait, or too lazy to crit someone else's and politely ask them to crit yours in return, I strangely to not feel the urge to do so anymore.

P.S: Read the rules on bumping.
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2007
454 IQ
It was ok... Hard to give a real crit when there's only a handful of riffs strewn together with nothing but guitar. Maybe work on it some more and make a new thread? and be more polite?
UG's Chuck
Join date: Apr 2009
1,083 IQ
Its ok... Just just your everyday generic heavy metal attempt riff. Add drums, a good bassline and maybe a harmonized guitar and it would be alot better.

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My rig is simple
Haha. UG's Chuck just said chuck. haha
You're not truly playing guitar unless you know theory.
*****es ain't ****
Join date: Apr 2008
783 IQ
You should change the time signatures, because it sounds weird as it is now. Sounds like just some riffs together, work on the transition, add drums bass and rhythm, continue the song, and Crit Mine.