CarlosAlejandro
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2009
516 IQ
#1
Okay, its my new work. Im working in that, so check this out. The intro and the introduction of the first verse is complete, im making the chorus and other stuff..

If someone can help me with the drums, i be gratefull..
so .. Check this out and tell me if you like my stuff : )

Greats !!
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Another Day - Progressive Stuff.gp5
" Living the world as the music makes me feel "
Last edited by CarlosAlejandro at Jul 12, 2009,
CarlosAlejandro
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2009
516 IQ
#3
you added me in the msn?.. Thanks, sounds good dude.. I like the drums
" Living the world as the music makes me feel "
CarlosAlejandro
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2009
516 IQ
#4
I make new stuff in it .. Check this out!
" Living the world as the music makes me feel "
jbridge90
More Ovaltine Please!
Join date: Mar 2008
654 IQ
#5
I really enjoyed where you took the song after the intro(I'm refering to the part labeled Part 1). The chords you used were odd and unorthodox at times, but I still really liked it.

Edit:

I just relistened to it, and maybe its just me but bar 18 seems off

And could you be a pal and crit. at least of my my songs?

The Three
Last edited by jbridge90 at Jul 10, 2009,