#1
Here is a Metal song I wrote, it's about playing in a rock and roll band. This is a party type of song. It is played in the Key of D, the chords for the verse used are D, A, F#M, and the chords for the chorus are A, G5 Interval, and D. It's played in 4/4 with 120 BPM on electric guitar with distortion and some reverb.

Dreams Are Forever

[VERSE 1]
They turn on the lights
And we hit the stage
You Fire up the amps
Cause it's time to play

The words all ring out
Ooh they can never die
Give it all you got
And reach for the sky

[CHORUS]
Ooh Dreams are forever
Lets live it together
Ooh Dreams are forever
We'll make it better
Ooh Dreams are forever


[VERSE 2]
We'll play you our songs
As we live our dreams
We will show the world
What rock and roll means

So shout it out loud
And let us be heard
It's a rockstar's life
To the very last verse

[CHORUS]
Ooh Dreams are forever
Lets live it together
Ooh Dreams are forever
We'll make it better
Ooh Dreams are forever

[BRIDGE]
We drink all the gin
As we live our dreams
Ooh we'll party again
And we aim to please

[CHORUS]
Ooh Dreams are forever
Lets live it together
Ooh Dreams are forever
We'll make it better
Ooh Dreams are forever

So give it a critique and tell me what you think please?

Thanks!
Last edited by BigDC at Jul 7, 2009,
#2
Sounds like it could make an awesome song . I liked the verses but i thought the bridge could have been a bit longer.
#3
After I looked at this more, I have to agree, the bridge is kind of short.

Anyone else, please? The more the merrier?