#1
I made an acoustic piece which is untitled so if anyone wants to check it out and comment/rate it, its on my profile. Ill return the favor. Thanks
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#4
The song itself is fairly good! As others have said though, you really need to work on your recording method. It sounds like you kind of messed up a bit on the soloing at around 1:37 and at other points it kinda sounded a little forced. Also the ended seemed too sudden, like it was missing one chord. However those are just nitpicks and you have an excellent song on your hands!

Here is mine if you would be so kind as to crit: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1154892
#5
Thanks a lot guys! And yeah i recorded with the mic on my computer so the quality is not that good. And for some reason i stopped the recording at the second to last chord. But thanks for the comments!
Quote by Rush_fan2112
i want to walk down the streets of a very large, populized city (one like toronto, or new york) wearing a wonder woman costume and eating a stick of butter

Quote by figsandbobo
I can eat a 16" no problem.
#6
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Nice progression, but it seems that the mic is a bit far from the amp/guitar. The soloing is actually pretty cool. I like this song but if the other problems were fixed it would much better.

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1154858

Did you play all the instruments in those songs? I thought they were pretty good. What did you use to record them?
Quote by Rush_fan2112
i want to walk down the streets of a very large, populized city (one like toronto, or new york) wearing a wonder woman costume and eating a stick of butter

Quote by figsandbobo
I can eat a 16" no problem.
#7
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Did you play all the instruments in those songs? I thought they were pretty good. What did you use to record them?

Yeah, I played everything. I plug in my amps to my computer.
#8
hey man. that was kinda cool. the recording wasent the best though, kinda scratchy/far away sounding. i liked when you came in with the electric type lead. that was a nice change up. cool progression. this was a cool peace. i would like to make it longer though and add lyrics to complete it. or maybe not, it sounds fine, maybe just make it longer. good job though. i liked it.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=20656880#post20656880