#2
So I saw you had no comments..

One, probably shouldn't bump your thread. As far as the song, or clip rather.. There's just not much to comment on. Work on a little cleaner playing as it's a little on the sloppy side. Not too bad though. It would work a little better with some vocals or other instruments, ya know? It's hard to rate something like that. But yeah I would suggest adding onto that - in any direction.. you'll probably get more feedback when there's more to comment on.
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