#1
Just want some feedback on these kinda half-assed lyrics I just finished.

It's about being controlled by other people/outside influences.
Enjoy:

AN EMPTY THRONE
Weakened lungs suffocate
Wind becomes water
They've pulled you under
They say life or death

Twisting and burning
Hellfire unfurling
The snake in your chest
Shed the old skin away

Wrench on the strings
Follow the master's hand
Dance, marionette
Fall into his spell

No man at the wheel
An empty throne
The high has fallen

Stolen
Falling
Brainwashed

An empty throne
The high has fallen

Down


Thanks.
=)
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#2
pretty cool man, metal I guess?
"I will endure, hide away...

I would outrun the scythe, glaring with failure"


Opeth - April Ethereal
#3
Quote by Vredesbyrd23
pretty cool man, metal I guess?


Thanks.

Yes, metal.
Sorry, should've pointed that out.
I'd rather die than go to heaven.

Quote by Chris.Rock.Art
I like you and you are special



Quote by perry589
I don't wank. I auto fellatio.