kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
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#1
Well let me know what i can improve on. It's not done just wanted to know if i should continue..
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.starrk
Troglodyte
Join date: Apr 2006
149 IQ
#2
Sounded very generic to me. Always try to create your own sound when writing a song, even if it seems hopeless.

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kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,191 IQ
#3
You're right it is kinda generic, o well haha
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Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
Brian Gelvin
Attack Attack!
Join date: Jan 2005
1,693 IQ
#4
Definitely has potential!! I really like it. Though there are somethings I would change. Such as the intro riff, instead of goin down to the 4th fret try the 5th. It sounded better to me. Also on measures 52 - 56, every measure has the same hammer on pull off at the end of the measure. Seems like a little too much, maybe change it in a way so it doesn't sound too consistent.
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MOODY17
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Join date: Aug 2008
141 IQ
#5
Quote by MetalGS3SE
Sounded very generic to me. Always try to create your own sound when writing a song, even if it seems hopeless.


i disagree, i thought it was fairly original, and pretty good.
.starrk
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Join date: Apr 2006
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#6
Quote by MOODY17
i disagree, i thought it was fairly original, and pretty good.

You must not listen to metalcore much .

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Incubus_Rage_27
UG's Lazy Stoner
Join date: Dec 2005
692 IQ
#7
I really enjoyed this man! I thought this piece was really decent and definately stand's out more than a lot of Metalcore-ish stuff.
I wasn't sure about the intro clean but when the distorted guitar comes in its a good touch, definately a great build up. The drop into the next section with the panned guitars sounds great and i can imagine some great vocals over it. the next bit wasnt my sorta thing too odd but the riff it drops into was absolutely top notch, id have liked to have heard some half time on the drums at some point tho! its definately a great song with potential, maybe return to that sick riff at 1:33 with the harmonies at some point but with really slow ass drums and broken guitar chords like proper chugga chugga underneath would sound proper badass. Im looking forward to hearing the finished peice man!

Ive just written a track of a fairly similar style, u reckon you could a have listen and tell me what you think?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1158325
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