i like it. really good

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It's not my style of music, but I really liked the overall feel of the demo, the atmosphere it created. Awesome stuff!!
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hmmmm I like the "Chorus" with the pinch harmonics but the drums need more fills and be a little louder.... and it would sound better with singing i think.... but it is really good, I like it, it's kinda catchy
That main riff is irresistible. I'm sure with the vocals in it its going to rock

If you really want criticism, then I'll say perhaps some of the verses feel somehow slow, or too long, but everytime the riff comes back its pretty good

Plus, with vocals, the verses will have a whole new dynamic, so keep it up man its good stuff