#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=niFDRoxNNbw

This is my new song, crit please? I did the keyboard and the guitar.
Would be appreciated for comments etc.

Check my profile if you want to hear anything else of mine.
Tim.

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Beyond this world strange things are known
Use this key, unlock the door
See what your fate might have in store
Come explore your dreams' creation
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Last edited by TimBFMV at Jul 8, 2009,
#2
the title is kinda cliche. but great tone and guitar playing. i got the vibe right away. almost a dessert thing. i would call this the ciharra or something. nice song. almost floyed sounding. not kuch to crit man. i liked it. a littels short but good. keep it up. good composing.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1159346
Last edited by chasepalmer at Jul 9, 2009,
#3
yeah, thanks
Tim.

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Use this key, unlock the door
See what your fate might have in store
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#4
it was pretty good. try experimenting with lots of different effects such as delay, massive amounts of reverb, flanger, etc. experimenting was a big thing behind what pink floyd did. try using a dog named shamus? haha. also, try to branch out of the pentatonic scale with some other exotic scales such as the harmonic minor scale and such. pentatonic isn't bad, but other scales will give you a more psychedelic feel if that is what you want.

could you listen to the original song in my profile (that's what it is called) and comment on it? thanks.
#5
Cheers.
Tim.

You have entered the Twilight Zone
Beyond this world strange things are known
Use this key, unlock the door
See what your fate might have in store
Come explore your dreams' creation
Enter this world of imagination