I just wrote this new song called catatonic fleshstorm. It is a very heavy song that sounds like a mix of Black Label Society and Slayer. I wrote this song originally as an Improv, but I came up with an order and it made this an awesome song. Please tell me what you think of it and what I can do to make it a better song. Thanks, and if you would like, I can look at one of your song and comment about it. This song is on my profile.