#1
I should've known better than to let you go
its one of those things i know im gonna regret
cuz ur beautiful face is still in my head
and its something im not gonna forget

i still hear your name in the wind
i still feel your body when i sleep
i still feel your touch on my skin
baby! i really want you back with me!

[chorus]
whyyy did i ever let you goo?
i never knew it was gonna be this way
oh baby why doesnt the sun ever shine anymore?
will you ever come back to me and make my day?

i tried to reach for you
but my hands were tied
i tried to forget you
but couldn't get you out of my mind

love is a funny game
you never know what you've got
until it doesnt matter anymore

love has reignited my flame
the fire has burned my ship
and brought me ashore

Theres something missing in my life, girl
and baby i know that something is youuuuu

Whyyy did i ever let you goo?
i never knew it was gonna be this way
oh baby why doesnt the sun ever shine anymore?
will you ever come back to me and make my day?

(solo)

Whyyy did i ever let you goo?
i never knew it was gonna be this way
Whyyy did i ever let you goo?
i never knew it was gonna be this way
oh baby why doesnt the sun ever shine anymore?
will you ever come back to me and make my day?

Hey guys. Thats the song I just wrote. I know its cliched but thats what I wanted it to be. Any feedback would be great. Constructive criticism would be much appreciated.
Thanks
#2
Very 80s power ballad cliche....i like it in someways. good job, good comparisons.
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