I thought it was really good, the lyrics were pertty damn good, and I loved those sustain chords, it makes it sound more flowy. But I think you might need to mesh the chours lyrics a little bit better, it kinda sounded rushed to me. But overall, great song man. I like that guitar too, what is it?

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1159668