#4
It's a pretty cool song, I too dig it. It has a lesser quality, but I think it kinda works for the song so I'm not sure if that's what you were going for.
#6
the first riff it's simple but effective, the vocal looks horrible but maybe for the quality, i suggest you to make more riffs to make more interesting the song.
A thing you can do it's making a clean verse and a strong chorus, a usual style in grunge
overall creative but needs more structuring
3/5

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