#1
here you go you start complaining
not to long fore it starts raining
spread to all the poeple....you know
stuck in their minds like a body frozen in the snow

sometimes lifes a bitch;gotta get over it
sometimes like an itch, it comes and goes bit by bit.

now you go and start to compare
your so called qualities to flaws of their character
ill bet your cryin on the inside
cause outside is where you wear your only pride

sometimes lifes a bitch; over and under it
sometimes lifes a bitch; so you talk ****....(thaTS ALL IT IS)

ill start by putting things into perspective
everything you say and do is contradictive
like a big dumb idiot you stop and stare
but i know what im doin, and i dont care.

sometimes lifes a bitch; just like you are
sometimes like a stich; it'll leave a big scar
#2
I actually liked this. I mean, what you see is what you get with these lyrics but that's not necessarily a bad thing. You're pretty explicit in your meaning but somewhere in the words, I think your voice came through. I can't really articulate why I feel that way but for some reason, I do.

What kind of genre would this be? I think that would help me and some others put it into perspective. I think if the music was more punk then these lyrics would definitely work. If it's meant to be like soft acoustic then I would consider revising them.
here, My Dear, here it is