#1
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There are no vocals cuz i haven't got any microphone.
It's an experiment for me

Recordings:
-Guitar: Jackson DXMG Dinky
-Amp: Amplitube (Plugin)
-Mixing: Riffworks T4(that's the cause of the horrible drums )
R.I.P.
Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
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Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004
#2
hey man i like this song alot. its got lots of nice riffs and progressions and a really good song structure. ending seemed a bit abrupt to me but not a big deal. Seeing as this is an alt kind of song you dont need a spine crushing distortion however if you make it slightly more defined i think itd be better. i thought the drum programming was pretty good however some of the tom fills at the end seem almost disconnected, you might want to continue a bass drum beat to make it abit smother. i think the sound on the drums are pretty good and the programming is good too. really good song, even without vocals it kept me entertained.
#3
Quote by MetalBass 77
hey man i like this song alot. its got lots of nice riffs and progressions and a really good song structure. ending seemed a bit abrupt to me but not a big deal. Seeing as this is an alt kind of song you dont need a spine crushing distortion however if you make it slightly more defined i think itd be better. i thought the drum programming was pretty good however some of the tom fills at the end seem almost disconnected, you might want to continue a bass drum beat to make it abit smother. i think the sound on the drums are pretty good and the programming is good too. really good song, even without vocals it kept me entertained.


what do you suggest me to make it more defined?
R.I.P.
Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
Per Yngve Ohlin 1969-1991
Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004
#4
Quote by Simon Blackwing
what do you suggest me to make it more defined?


well im not too familiar with amplitube so i would maybe try another preset, however the tone you have is good for an alt song, maybe try raising the mids? im not really good on guitar tone i jsut kinda use presets and mess around for bass.
#5
ok i'll change the tone soon
R.I.P.
Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
Per Yngve Ohlin 1969-1991
Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004