#1
Hello. Here's some lyrics I wrote, I'd like some comments.
- Yes I am aware of the Testament song called the same..

The night is fallin' within the hour
Let me kiss your pink flower
Paradise in
Paradise out
It might be a sin
But I'm still feeling proud
When the day turns to night
I head for your light
And you shine on me
And you set me free
Yeah!

What's so strange about love
Is when you've got it
You feel like you can't get enough
But in the end it will cast you right into the pit
Oh no!
#2
finaly a song dedicated to us pitmonkeys !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

serious note: kickass lyrics man
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#3
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finaly a song dedicated to us pitmonkeys !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

serious note: kickass lyrics man


it's sorta Pentagram/Stone Bunny alike lyrics (not the sexual/love themes)
but the way I wrote it.

And thank you very much .

Unfortunately I'm just out of a band to perform it in. . .
1971 - was the f***ing year
Bobby Liebling is the man!
#4
Into the Pit by Testament

Deep in the pit and lying alone
Where death has reared itself a throne
We're all the good, the bad
The worst and the best
And where they land is their eternal rest

Foul plays of passion
At twilight's dim
In joy of woe, of good and sin
Winds of storm and fates overcast
Darkly my presence
Is now your past

Join the insanity
Or die as you fall
Into the pit!
The mass production
And the killing of all
Into the pit!
The future screams for help
Are fading away
Into the pit!
The world tomorrow
Will it die for today?
Into the pit!

So in the sad, silent watches of night
The lonely pathway envisions my sight
Echoes of laughter
And boundless cries
So here I wander under infinite skies

Join the insanity
Or die as you fall
Into the pit!
The mass production
And the killing of all
Into the pit!
The future screams for help
Are fading away
Into the Pit!
The world tomorrow
Will it die for today?
Into the pit!
#5
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Into the Pit by Testament

Deep in the pit and lying alone
Where death has reared itself a throne
We're all the good, the bad
The worst and the best
And where they land is their eternal rest

Foul plays of passion
At twilight's dim
In joy of woe, of good and sin
Winds of storm and fates overcast
Darkly my presence
Is now your past

Join the insanity
Or die as you fall
Into the pit!
The mass production
And the killing of all
Into the pit!
The future screams for help
Are fading away
Into the pit!
The world tomorrow
Will it die for today?
Into the pit!

So in the sad, silent watches of night
The lonely pathway envisions my sight
Echoes of laughter
And boundless cries
So here I wander under infinite skies

Join the insanity
Or die as you fall
Into the pit!
The mass production
And the killing of all
Into the pit!
The future screams for help
Are fading away
Into the Pit!
The world tomorrow
Will it die for today?
Into the pit!


Yes?
1971 - was the f***ing year
Bobby Liebling is the man!