#1
I made up this thing earlier today it was this little thing that connected E to F#m and I built off of it. I recorded it quick in garageband and put it up and just wanted some criticism. So could you please?
#2
Defiantly! I really like that track a lot, and I would love to see it bloom into a full song! My only complaint is that it was a bit repetitive, but seeing as it's just a song IDEA that is kind of to be expected. Clean it up, through in some vocals, and you have a song that at least I would listen to!

If you'd be so kind as to crit my stuff that would be awesome! https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1154892