#1
i released a taste of this song earlier and it got some good responses. So I did a studio version of it, and finished writing this song. so I just wanted to throw it out here, I'm still going to do a bit of fine tuneing to it. but for the most part its done.

so please C4C and I hope you enjoy.
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Mr.+Wrips/

I did the vocals this morning and they were a tad shaky so i'll redo them later today, by the second verse they get better.
#2
thats good . it reminds me of jimi hendrix, which is a good thing. all your material is pretty good keep up the good work. i like the tacky love song it made me laugh.
#3
haha, yeah i wrote that one for some friends of mine. thanks dude the intro is my guitar recorded doing a little blues riff, but then i played it backwards. it reminds me of "castles made of sand" by hendrix.
#4
Quote by Mr. Wrips
haha, yeah i wrote that one for some friends of mine. thanks dude the intro is my guitar recorded doing a little blues riff, but then i played it backwards. it reminds me of "castles made of sand" by hendrix.

yea thats song song i couldnt remember the name
#5
The swell effect you use on the lead guitar in the intro is great. The Mars Volta is one of my favorite bands and it completely reminds me of their style. As for the verse/hooks of the track, the mixing quality isn't too good. It sounds like you used audacity and didn't put much time into aligning the samples right. As for the sound of your song, I like it. Work on sequencing your tracks better and you'll have a solid sound on your hands.

Like I tell most people after listening to their music, I'm not sure my songs are your style, so if you find yourself unable to critique on it no worries, but any feedback is appreciated.

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