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Join date: Dec 2007
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This is a song I wrote a while ago, I have been so inactive on this forum in this last couple weeks, sorry about that.

It's just some punk, I wouldn't say Pop Punk, but it's not original "Sex Pistols" punk.


Yes, poop.
Join date: Jan 2008
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Intro solo sounded a lot like that solo from that Sum 41 song, I think "The Hell Song," but it's good.

I liked the bridge, it was pretty different but in a good way.
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Join date: Jun 2008
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I enjoyed this quite a bit. The guitar solo sections were good; they weren't drawn out or tiring. And the overall rhythm of the piece was enjoyable, having strayed away from just straight sixteenth-notes or quarter-notes. The only thing I can suggest that you might want to do in the future is to pan the instruments away from each other and mess with the volume.
*****es ain't ****
Join date: Apr 2008
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Nice song, albeit quite simple. Which is not necessarily a bad thing, but still... Enjoyable though. The solos were pretty nice.
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Join date: Jun 2007
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Pretty good and seems easy to put lyrics to. But the intro solo sounded wayyyy too much like the hell song solo. I dont think the key change for the chorus fit in too well, i would use another progression. I like the interlude riff. Its kinda hard to crit punk songs as there isnt too much riffs ect.