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haha, here's a fun little song I wrote. Usually I write love songs because that's what I'm best at, but here's my stab at something other than that. Sorry for the length, I'd love some constructive feedback!

We're where the waters waves
Just hit our face
Wash them clean of that place
Where the sun won't give what we wanna take
And in the disco club
Where lights don't give up
And everythings all a blur
All the disco sweat reminds you of the water

I sat down by the pool
The water wasn't cool
Made it easy to get used to sinking
All the love that we're thinking

I can't contrast
When I'm having such a blast
And it all feels nice
Lit up by fire fly lights
Torches tiki tiki
The bottles leaking
So drink up quickly
And we'll write our history

We're in this together
And we just play our part
Living scot free for eternity
Living for sake of being free
This feels like a home
Not house where I feel alone
Where the cool LEDs and the big screen TVs
Show me beauty in HD

Why can't this last
When I'm having such a blast
And it all feels nice
Lit up by fire fly lights
Torches tiki tiki
The sand is creeping
Dip your feet quickly
And we'll write our story

And she said where'd you go
She said she said where'd you go
I just wanna let you know
I didn't wanna go a step, a step, a step

Let's not make this a past
Let's keep it going forever
Let's not let it crash
Let's live like this forever
Right here forever
Right now the suns the hero
Sunsets so clever
When the sun sinks below zero