Good job! Very well put together: I know how tricky it can be to match all of the components (guitar 1, 2, bass, drums, vox) together. I may suggest trying to try raising pitch in your voice on all of the "away from the sun" parts, instead of just a few of em. Other than that, great job.


Crit mine?: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1163143