#1
[verse one]:
Face like an angel, a body well endowed
A dark salacious past to make daddy proud
Eyes fall upon you in anticipation
You know what they want; it’s just a matter of time

[chorus]:
Drop your dress just like a curtain; let them see who you really are
Yeah girl, do it, you know that will get you so far

[verse two]:
What can I say? You were meant for so much more
And now Michaela, you know what’s in store
A life of hard labour, working from your back
You brought this on yourself; you’re the one to blame

[chorus]:
Drop your dress just like a curtain; let them see who you really are
Yeah girl, do it, you know that will get you so far

[vocal break: guitar solo]

[breakdown]:
Harlot or heartbreaker(x2) [backing vocals: you’re just a harlot (on x3)]
A body that’s claimed many…
Harlot or heartbreaker(x2) [backing vocals: you’re just a harlot (on x3)]
A body that’s claimed many…
Harlot or heartbreaker(x2) [backing vocals: you’re just a harlot (on x3)]
A body that’s claimed many…
Harlot or heartbreaker(x2) [backing vocals: you’re just a harlot (on x3)]
A body that’s claimed many men (prolonged note over chorus)

[demi-chorus]:
Yeah girl, do it, you know that will get you so far
Arcane Echo

Just call me Ethan
#2
I liked it. I think it would make a solid song. The lyrics were accessible, they had a nice flow to them, and they didn't seem too contrived nor cliche.

I'm new to songwriting so, unfortunately, I'm only able to point the obvious flaws in a piece. Fortunately, I see none here.

This was a good read, in my opinion
here, My Dear, here it is