#1
Hey guys,
Earlier I posted a thread of my guy's first song, Breaking the Addiction.

We just put up another one called "Curves", and I would like for you guys to listen to it and critique it

This is our second song, but we have many more that haven't been recorded yet.

C4C

http://www.myspace.com/outboundrocks
#2
i like the guitar riff, but i felt like the tone was a little too dull. maybe use an acoustic? i liked the vocals. they could be a little more energetic, but i think the raspy feel really suits your voice. your harmonies could tighten up considerably, but it would be cool if you get them down pat.

thanks for the crit
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