#3
You take the vocals one octave down when it gets to the 'I don't ever wanna feel' part. That sounds kind of awkward.

I'm not saying it was bad, it was actually pretty good. I'm just saying it could be even better if you trained the higher register of your voice a bit more, so you could reach for all of it.
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