#1
Haven't posted here for a long time. Used to hang around R&R a few years ago and I figured it was time to come back again.

Ah, so this is a rough cover of No one Would Riot for Less by Bright Eyes. It's my favourite song by them, but maybe not as well known. It should've been a quality recording, but on top of my computer skipping a bit, it features cameos of parents shouting and mum's vacuum solo.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/kdownes/music/
^it should be the top link there.

So yeah, let me know what you think and i'll be happy to crit you in return. I don't have a life so i'll get back to you pretty quick.
#2
I love it! NOWRFL is such a good song. The backing vocals in the chorus were nicely executed.

My only complaint is that the guitar part after approximately 3:25 sounds like it's not keeping time.

I'd love it if you added the little string riff after the bridge. It's one of my favorite parts.
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On second thought, **** tuning forks. You best be carrying around a grand piano that was tuned by an Italian
#3
Nice mate!
I love this song, probably one of their best that i've heard.
#4
As soon as I manage to transcribe the string riff I'll throw it in. I couldn't actually here where the guitar went out of time, could you maybe give me an example?
#5
it's right after 3:25. It sounds like the rhythm has been lost. To me at least.

I don't quite know how I could explain this....

well, put it this way, if you played the same picking pattern as on the verses as in there, it would sound on-time/fine.
Quote by icaneatcatfood
On second thought, **** tuning forks. You best be carrying around a grand piano that was tuned by an Italian