I may change a few parts but for the most part it's done. Critiques, comments, and insults are all appreciated.

Bathed in a green light,
Do I follow?
Into a new feeling,
A new sentiment.

Am I pathos?
Bathed in rain,
Is this old?
All questions that,

Time will answer,
Only to me,
Angel and I can,
Stop it all,
Bring it back,
Am I pathos?
Not your demands?
Not the first time,
Has got me again.

Bathed in a greenlight
Do I follow?
Into a new feeling,
And stop time again.

I know you,
Any time you talk,
Time proceeds,
Don't fight my war,
But maybe I'm,

Last edited by ATXTheKiller at Jul 16, 2009,