#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ecDx4cgTORE

Don't go easy on me I want to be criticized haha. I'm going to re film it so it's less sloppy and no screw ups. This was my second take. Please point out every flaw

I will crit someone elses songs if they crit mine

(I read the rules but I'm new here so sorry if this isn't allowed)