I finally bought some proper monitoring speakers so I've given them a try and this is what I have come up with.

Any critisism and tips for a better song or mix are welcome. I think the only thing i'm not happy with is the transition to and from the clean bit towards the end.

The song is on my profile under "Fallout groove"


What do you think?
Excellent piece, very well built.
I love your vibrato with the clean sound at the beginning.
I see no problem with the transition from the clean bit towards the end.
For the transition to the clean, yes, it is a little sudden...maybe a dive on the last distoted note would help, I don,t know...
Anyways, I really like what you done.

C4C :

Got also a whole bunch of threads with other tracks/videos, if you have the time.
Last edited by belpat at Jul 17, 2009,
Makes me think of Textures, if they played entirely in 4/4.
Q: Favourite Pink Floyd song?
A: The one where they get wicked high and play Emin and A for an hour.
Thats pertty good, I think its a pertty awesome groove, IDK if its my speakers but the palm mute sounds like it lacks bass, it might just be the distortion, IDK, but it sounds like it has plenty of bass when the notes ring out, its just the palm muting dosent sound right. But good work otherwise.
Thanks everyone for your comments.

Customisbetter, yea I have listened to Keith Merrow's stuff before and love it. Thanks anyway.

The bezerker, I think a ring out would work but I was trying something different here because I always seem to do that when going from distortion to clean. Just experimenting really.