Well, new stuff from me. I started before I went on holiday to Stockholm and when I came back home I used a couple of days to finish. I don't know, but I think it's some kind of generic.
Descending - metalcore.zip
It's allright. Chorus sounded little like Like Callisto to a Star In Heaven....
It's good, but I think it's too much like every other metalcore song. 8/10
(yea who am I saying some songs is good/bad, sorry lol)

Edit: but it flows.
I thought it was a bit repetitive, I didn't really notice a big difference until measure 66. Thought the intro was a nice way to start off, and measure 66 was pretty awesome too. Solo was okay, parts were really awesome, like measure 82-86 but after that (except for 94) it was just a bunch of notes to me. But I don't know, maybe that's what you were going for, and thats cool too. I thought it flowed really nicely too

Overall, 7.5/10, just change some parts up a bit