rawr1692
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2008
23 IQ
#1
Hey, so this is my first song, I guess its kinda hardcore? I dunno, I just went with it haha. Anyways, tell me what you think, I'll crit4crit.
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Song.zip
UltimateDud
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2008
578 IQ
#2
not to shabby man, some of the notes kinda colide a bit in some parts, but hey, it's a good start, I'd be quite happy if my first song was this good
tubby_champ
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2007
283 IQ
#3
I agree with UltimateDud
wouldn't even know its your first song
Gumle
UG's panic attack
Join date: May 2008
143 IQ
#4
Well let's start with the piano parts.
The slow piano which plays alone got a very good melody, you find the mood of the song from the first note. The "running" section is just amazing. It really gives this song a great flow.
Your transitions could be better. Maybe some leading chord into the next gives a better flow.
You guitar work is pretty good, especially when it gets fast.
The slow part is not that good. I don't really think it fits the rest of the song.
But overall a very good first try.
8(9)/10

Check my out: Descending - Metalcore
justtryme
Registered User
Join date: May 2009
126 IQ
#5
i guess its good for a first song.... idk actually...
supea
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2007
219 IQ
#6
8½/10, I really liked many parts, especiallythe pianos and the faster part. Tho the "sweeping" part or whatever it is, wasn't so good imo.
rkay
Banned
Join date: Apr 2005
352 IQ
#7
you need to re-add the bass in actual bass tuning. right now its tuned the same as guitars.