#1
This is a song I wrote about a situation that is going on with my ex-girlfriend. Ever since we broke up we have been trying to be friends but we always end up fighting. So anyway this is what come out. Right now all I have are lyrics.

Smile
I try hard to say it
I'm sorry
I regret everything I've done
All of the pain
The suffering that you gained
Didn't deserve it at all

Broken promises
All the tears you shed
Were due to the lies
Made you insecure
Although I'm not sure
Of the reason why

Forgive me
For all I did and said
For messing with your head
I wish I could go back again
Fix all the mistakes
Give it all it takes
Just to see you smile again

I know I put you through hell
Laughed every time you fell
I just watched you cry
Stepped on every bruise
Used you to wipe my shoes
A puppet in my eyes

All your friends they say
"He doesn't understand.
He is full of lies."
I have come to prove
What I say is true
And that I have changed

Forgive me
For all I did and said
For messing with your head
I wish I could go back again
Fix all the mistakes
Give it all it takes
Just to see you smile again

[Will put a solo in here]

Forgive me
For all I did and said
For messing with your head
I wish I could go back again
Fix all the mistakes
Give it all it takes
Just to see you smile again

And there you go. So what do you think?
#2
Very generic but gets the point across....so basically this won't make u famous or any better than people thought u were before, except for maybe your ex if she finds it romantic...
#3
sounds like it wud b a All Time Low song or sumthing so some chicks like that i gues it depends on the way its sung but i can definatly picture it being a song unlike some other ppls stuf on here
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#5
wow dude, this fits my situation exactly. yea pretty generic lyrics but the fact that it can be related back to your personal experiences makes it great. it is a little depressing, but good nonetheless

crit my songs? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1166006
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