Its_Rock77
Anthony Green Fanboy <3
Join date: Jul 2007
1,501 IQ
#1
well, I went back to finish a song I started a long time ago. the first riffs are probably the best I've ever written which is why I really wanted to finish this one.
structure is lacking, it just kinda moves along farther into a deep pit of awesome. or not awesome. :/ whichever
I don't know what to think. I really believe that it gets far less interesting as the song goes (reason #1 of why I brought back the beginning at the end)

whatever, blah blah blah. I always type too much here and no one reads this stuff.

but basically, give thoughts. I'll return crits.
Attachments:
9-5-7-7.zip
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
icronic
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Join date: Aug 2004
2,638 IQ
#3
Quote by Its_Rock77
it just kinda moves along farther into a deep pit of awesome.


And that about sums it up too.

It's good to hear a song from you though, always liked your stuff.

Not a whole lot to really crit here really.

A little better mixing wouldn't hurt. Some pan on the guitars, a little more bass.

Thing's sometimes felt a little cluttered as well. Mostly the fault of RSE as the clutter was reduced a fair bit in midi. Still it seemed sometimes the drums just needed to back off a little bit and let the lead guitar do its work.

There were also a couple transitions and tempo changes that were a little iffy.

Still yes. Awesome and more awesome.
jimmyled
*****es ain't ****
Join date: Apr 2008
783 IQ
#4
Amazing intro, really cool Lead Guitar, awesome Riffs, great Solo, what's more to say? It's perfect as it is. A job well done.
My songs are in my sig if you want to crit them.
Time Bomb
Grunge Kid
Join date: Feb 2007
649 IQ
#5
Wow, I don't have anything negative to say about your tab, it is just awesome!
I love how the verse part flows into the chorus part with the addition of the tempo.
I also really like the PH part on the lead guitar, really got me going
Keep up the good work, bud and please C4C my thrash song if you could.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1165609