well, I went back to finish a song I started a long time ago. the first riffs are probably the best I've ever written which is why I really wanted to finish this one.
structure is lacking, it just kinda moves along farther into a deep pit of awesome. or not awesome. :/ whichever
I don't know what to think. I really believe that it gets far less interesting as the song goes (reason #1 of why I brought back the beginning at the end)

whatever, blah blah blah. I always type too much here and no one reads this stuff.

but basically, give thoughts. I'll return crits.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...

...You're still disappointing them...
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it just kinda moves along farther into a deep pit of awesome.

And that about sums it up too.

It's good to hear a song from you though, always liked your stuff.

Not a whole lot to really crit here really.

A little better mixing wouldn't hurt. Some pan on the guitars, a little more bass.

Thing's sometimes felt a little cluttered as well. Mostly the fault of RSE as the clutter was reduced a fair bit in midi. Still it seemed sometimes the drums just needed to back off a little bit and let the lead guitar do its work.

There were also a couple transitions and tempo changes that were a little iffy.

Still yes. Awesome and more awesome.
Amazing intro, really cool Lead Guitar, awesome Riffs, great Solo, what's more to say? It's perfect as it is. A job well done.
My songs are in my sig if you want to crit them.