#1
well, this is one of my first songs and the first i actually enjoyed

it's a scrub, a demo, so don't expect too much on production

(just rhytm and lead guitar)

links :

http://www.myspace.com/johnnlemonn
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lbvuuz-woZQ

(i do realize that the rhytm guitar should've had less overdrive or maybe that's just me )

C4C, thanks
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Last edited by MegaShreeder at Jul 19, 2009,
#2
honestly that was a little rough on the ears. the song idea isn't bad but the guitar sound is not so good. you need to practice the lead section more as you can tell that you were really thinking about it instead of letting it flow.a few more run through and a better guitar sound and you should be heading in the right direction. oh and play it to a click track or something that will help you keep time as you lost it several times.
#3
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honestly that was a little rough on the ears. the song idea isn't bad but the guitar sound is not so good. you need to practice the lead section more as you can tell that you were really thinking about it instead of letting it flow.a few more run through and a better guitar sound and you should be heading in the right direction. oh and play it to a click track or something that will help you keep time as you lost it several times.


hmm, yea, too much distortion.
i don't really like to work with a click, i'll try it someday

it's a good guitar (dean evo special select).
i did the lead on the spot and the rhytm too.

i just came to that with the intro in mind

thanks for the crit, man
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#4
cool song. i wasent expecting much. but this wasent bad at all. reminded me of some kind of neil young grunge stuff. like down by the river or something. it was a little long, and i think it would be easyer to listen to if you dropped the distortion for some parts of the song, to mix it up. other then that good job man. keep it up. thanks for the crit btw.