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Here's my second one on UG. Just like my earlier one this is meant to be a metalcore song (greatly inspired by Architects), so a lot of it will be screamed and grunted. The italicized parts are sung cleanly.
It's still in the making but constructive critisism is more than welcome. Thanks a lot!

- Chasing Dreams

I only see you when I close my eyes
You’re everything that I love and despise
Leaving me be with an empty heart
It was too soon that we should part
Now we’re all alone again
Nothing left but memories from our times
What I’d do for one more time
Just one more time to see you
Again (But I can feel you next to me)
Just one more time to see you
Again (But I can feel you next to me)
Just one more time to see you
Again (But I can feel you next to me)
Just one more time to see you
Again (But I can feel you next to me)
Yeah I can feel you next to me

I can’t take it
Why are you doing this to me
If I can only have you in my dreams
I’ll never wake up again
I can’t take it
Why are you doing this to me
If I can only have you in my dreams
I’ll never wake up again

In these times of desperation
My mind eats away at me

How could I’ve ever get this curse
Why does it just keep getting worse
In these times of desperation
My mind eats away at me

What’s going through your head right now
Should I hang on or should I just bow

But I can feel you next to me
Yeah I can feel you next to me

I can’t take it
Why are you doing this to me
If I can only have you in my dreams
I’ll never wake up again
No, I can’t take it
Why are you doing this to me
I’ll
Never wake up
A-gain
Last edited by Fzau at Jul 19, 2009,