#1
I sit naked in the battlefield, dead at night
listening to old ghost whispers and
watching the mist crawl slowly
like a battalion of spirits.
The dew hits the skin with
God's gentle touch,
tall grass against bare back
silk and crickets chirping
endless stars once hidden by streetlights

I stare at the field in front of me
seeing only a seascape of purple, an island of trees
the young deceased, the beauty of nature
and every reason to damn the sun.
Quote by Arthur Curry
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#2
It's good. It makes you think, which I always like.
I was wondering, is this a spiritual battle?
Did it just happen?
Do you want to damn the sun because of the deaths that happened? or some other reason? Because at the same time you are showing the beauty of nature, and the sun is part of nature.
#3
It's a literal battlefield. The idea is that there is so much wonder to experience the night that we cannot 'see' in the daytime because the sun helps us literally see.
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#5
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I stare at the field in front of me
seeing only a seascape of purple, an island of trees
the young deceased, the beauty of nature
and every reason to damn the sun.
/great imagery.
you go, girl.
There's a road that leads to the end of all suffering. You should take it.


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#6
"The dew hits the skin with"

I felt like the second "the" shoulda been "my", but really, that's being pretty damn nitpicky

Loved this, good to see you posting some stuff again.
#7
=]

Thank you, fellas. I've been having a difficult time writing lately, but a very good time living.
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theguitarist
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