#1
The lyrics to this I posted in the Songwriting forums a few days ago, and now I finally have the whole thing recorded and in my profile.

I was looking for some crit on the guitar riff and solo (3:25). And vocals if you want, but I'm not much of a singer lol. I know that.

C4C as well, just let me know.
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#2
The rythm guitar is basic strumming : well done, but nothing special to it.
I liked the solo. It is well built meaning that it keeps the attention of the listener.
I feel the song would at least require a bass line too...
Globaly : Well done

C4C:
Thx for critting "X" and "Y".
If you have the time, feel free to crit also my 2 acoustic tracks :
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1164009
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1162660
#3
thanks for the crit. nice work man. i like the vibe.nice simple sounding chords. i though the vocals were decent. not bad at all, youre actualy a good singer. this song hit the spot for me. good job man. i love the feel of this. you can tell it comes from the heart. good song.