This is pretty much the first "decent" song i've really wrote, and i know nothing of theory or drums, but I like it at least. And I do plan to change the outro, just lost all creativity when I got there

Say what you think, and post a link to yours and i'l crit back
Last edited by BEBEB at Jul 20, 2009,
It was repetitive and dragged on. Those chords dragged on and on. I would suggest knocking off about 1 bar for each chord duration.