#1
This is something I recorded today in about an hour.

Usually I write my songs in guitar pro first, but I just composed it as I went on my guitar while recording it. Most of the clean guitar leads were half improvised(Since it took me like 5 tries to record them, they were improvised, but with an idea in mind)

Most of the songs I write are metalcore, but this just came out like this, and I'm fine with it, it's something different.

It's on my profile called "Instrumental Song", tell me what you think.

C4C
#2
i liked the mellower parts alot. the transition to the heavy parts didn't flow well.
#3
I see what you mean now.

There really isn't a transition.

I think Im going to add my own drum part instead of using that drum machine. I could make the transitions better. I could play 4 notes of muted distorted chords at the end of the verses along with a drum fill to make the transition to the chorus better.

Thank you the critique.
#4
Hey, man, I agree. That's really nice sounding. If you just added some better transition that's be awesome. Even without transitions it sounds awesome.