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Some early lyrics, probably need some revision. If you want to hear the song they're going to, in my profile is a song called "Containment". The lyrics aren't complete, I still need to add and fix them. Please, though, any and all critique is welcome.
Like the title said, I'm pretty new to writing lyrics but I'm a pretty good writer otherwise.

[Verse 1]
Bottled up inside a lie
Lid held tight tied by the angry cries
Outside weather's fine
but inside does breeds storms
Can't contain the pressure anymore

Will I ever be free?

[Chorus]
Pressure building up
Walls surley soon will break
(Will I ever?)
(Will I ever?)
Now the
Pressure's building up
And I think I've had enough
(Will you ever?)
(Will you ever?)
Stop!?

[Verse 2]
Please Stop before walls come crashing down
I don't want this, what will we see?
I fear for alienation, constantly
reigned down upon me.

I hope I don't blow.

[Chorus]
Pressure building up
Walls surley soon will break
(Will I ever?)
(Will I ever?)
Now the
Pressure's building up
And I think I've had enough
(Will you ever?)
(Will you ever?)
Stop!?

Thanks.
Last edited by Defnition at Jul 21, 2009,