I like how minor and foreboding this is, it could become a psychobilly track with some crazy vocals and distorted rhythms. I do wish the melodies were a bit more complex though; its got a brutally simple feel with the rhythm guitar. Though, Its not necessarily a bad thing because all of the instruments are well played.
Cheers for the comments

Drums were midi - I wrote them with it but recorded it and then worked out how to add the drum track from gp5. Guess I should have started with the drum track instead of ending with it lol. Next time