#1
hi

a couple months ago i recorded a song and put it up on myspace.
its called "Make Some Music?".... the other songs are kinda just bull**** songs but you may listen if you wish haha

heres the link : http://www.myspace.com/listenwithheadphonesde

id like to know what you think.... C4C but im not sure how helpful my advise will be
#4
This really seems like a good start for a 'feel good' song!
Keep the rest of the song like this and it will be great... and i mean it!