#1
Long time no see.
This song was clearly inspired by August Burns Red. It has some ****ty lyrics too, not to take it seriously.
The song is about cheating on your girlfriend, sadly, inspired from a true story happened to myself.

Do you have the guts to live together happily after the event , to live the rest of your life in a lie, or you just tell everything?
If you are in true love, like me, you must choose the first one. And confess yourself in a song like this.

Will do crit for crit.
Attachments:
Moments.zip
#2
sounds pretty good i want to hear it with real instruments though. it sounds a little light for ABR. i really wouldnt change anything except for the way you ended it. it nedds like a bigger sounding ending.it sounds real good.keep up the good work.

Check out my songs in my profile. The one thats incomplete was ABR inspired. please comment and listen.
#3
Dude, two words... OH SH*T!!!!

Intro - Amazing clean, sounded familiar, like The Bleeding by Five Finger Death Punch

Pre-Verse 1 - Really cool, very heavy feel to it, it's really need

Verse 1 - I drooled a little this is really amazing lol I picked up my guitar to learn it.

Breakdown - Had a really nice feel to it, it's really good, I would love to hear some screamo over it.

Verse 2 - Doesn't really do verse 1 justice, it should be a little heavier to me, then the chorus, is a nice change into melody, beautiful.

Breakdown - Not too interesting to me, I was sort of on the edge of my seat for it to be over really, sorry.

Interlude, it would've been nice to have a little variation, I like it the way it is, but you could've done so much more with it.

Bridge - was really cool.

Verse 3 - Felt like it drug on a little from the Bridge...

Chorus - Had a nice feel to it still.

Chorus 2 - I didn't think adding another instrument was enough to kill the repetition

Breakdown - It's still kinda boring right here... Sorry

8/10 relaly good work mate.
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