#1
Hey there,


I have just uploaded five of my songs (midi) on profile page.

Please comment on how I could improve them, so that they can be perfect for recording.

Two are instrumentals, and the other three are songs.

C4C as usual


Thx,
AJ
#3
Thx, crit is on your page.
Do you think i should release ep with these, or put more songs on to make an lp?
#5
Hey ppl,

What sort of mood do each of these songs remind you of? - I need to name the two instrumentals and write lyrics for the other three.

At the moment, 'find a way' will be about heaven/hell (that's it ;(

Thx
AJ
#6
Well, that one is tricky...
Although it is obvious by listening to your tracks that you have composition skills,
you are killed by that midi stuff. I just can't go past that artificial sound. I hate plain midi when it tries to emulate an instrument.
On top of it, imo, posting midi guitar tracks on guitar oriented forum is like shooting a bullet in your foot.
You should re-record using actual guitar playing, because, again, your tracks seem pretty good.
Just giving my 2 cents here.
#7
haha... i like the 'shooting a bullet in foot' analogy! :L

I wanted to upload in midi so I could get full feedback on how to improve before properly recording... i haven't got drum software or a bass at home, so have to ask other people to record those bits for me... i only want to ask them when track is perfect so that they don't have to rerecord

Sorry about that rather long 'speech', hahaha

Btw, i'm adding you on myspace... i really like your tracks
#8
Gave find a way a listen, sounds good composition wise. I really enjoyed the bass intro. I'd like to hear the finished products and not the midi nintendoness.
#9
Hey, does anyone have any ideas on what mood the two instrumentals remind you of?
Also, what could I base the lyrics of the other three songs on?

Also, please comment on them on my profile.

Thx
AJ